First of all, as far as we know, Sidious was never "gay". Don't use that word that way, and also words like "bitch" and what-not. If you want your edit to be taken seriously, drop the high school vocabulary.

I am french, not really good in english..so I do what I can...I am sure you have understand what I mean by : gay and bitch. I think it fits perfectly what Lucas have done with this.

But your solution seems to be to simply cut out all of the bad parts and then moves scenes around between the cuts to try to make them flow

Absolutely not, it's not done so simply. First of all I think about the sense of all, if I'm going to need stuff from other sequences etc

But, for example, Mace tells Anakin to stay, and then literally in the next shot he's gone and taking off. I know you said that it's an editing technique (your exact words being "in a cut, all the sequences do not systematically occur in real time"), but this kind of editing only works in certain ways.

You're right, but isn't this a minor sequence ? a detail ? I can easly cut before Mace takeoff...I just let this because I like Anakin "stance" at this moment.

For example, Mace kicking Palpatine. In one cut, Mace goes from one position to suddenly being able to kick Palpatine, and then a WAY to quick cut over to Anakin.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ky60ZJsjjTI

We simply don't have the same priority : I am trying to give more soul to a sequence, to the entire movie, and you focus only on details. When I am talking about the sense... you are talking about my "rough cut" (and speaking of this, I do not agree !)