Oh no, cutnshut -- everybody here has been nothing but helpful! It was great to get feedback so quickly, and the ideas that were generated in this thread were terrific.

Spence's edit suffered because he didn't ask for input before releasing it. I wanted to go the opposite route and collaborate with the OT community before I went too far. And the more I talked it out, the more it looked like my ideas weren't going to work.

But like I said, maybe something here will inspire a bolder editor than me. :)