Post #426327

Author: fishmanlee
Parent topic: The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/426327/action/topic#426327
Date created: 21-Jul-2010, 4:55 PM

i think the volcanic planet line should be moved to either at the end after "you will be safe there" or between the word "system" and "in the outer rim"......or just cut