MTHaslett said:
That's awesome, Brash Stryker!
With that curt tone to his voice, I imagine he's saying something like "What do you mean flying in so low? Don't you know that disrupts these evaporators? Do you think I like baking my circuits out here all day? What do you want? Your mother? Let's see if master knows what you're talking about."
I don't know. Something grumpy like that.
That's exactly the kind of attitude I'm intending for him, but I hadn't bothered writing the dialogue yet. Your example may very well be what I'm looking for :-)
Anyway, I'm highjacking Trooperman's thread. Feel free to drop by mine to discuss further.