You have some great ideas, thecutter. But I agree with most of rpvee's post: I too think most of your work is a little too jumpy and I think that's because you cut out the stuff you don't think work, but don't concern yourself with the actual flow of the scene.

And maybe this is not the right place for this, but you keep criticizing or parodying Anakin's (admittedly mostly awful) lines by saying they aren't Vader enough, but I'd like to point out that Anakin hasn't always been Vader. Had he been, there would've been no fun in seeing the transformation. I agree something should be done about most of his dialogue, but cutting stuff like his glee during the spacebattle seems a little pointless to me.