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Post #425064

Author
rpvee
Parent topic
Revenge Of The Cut - Star Wars: Revenge Of The Sith (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
13-Jul-2010, 10:02 PM

Ok, I have a lot of critique and what-not on these clips that I will post in the near future.  In the meantime, I just had a really quick suggestion I don't want to forget.  In the latest version of the Dooku execution, Palpatine talks to Anakin to sooth his doubts in his actions, but his tone of voice doesn't seem to fit since it's been mere seconds, not enough time for him to be able to notice Anakin's discomfort.  I suggest the following:

Anakin kills Dooku.  The shot of him looking confused.

"He was an unarmed prisoner.  I shouldn't have done that-"

(Palpatine cuts him off) "You did well, Anakin.  He was too dangerous to be kept alive."

"It's not the Jedi way."

"It is only natural..." and so on.