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ImperialFighter
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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11-Jul-2010, 9:31 PM

Tremendous colouring on the Snowspeeder shots in your recent 'Luke's Escape' clip adywan, and it reminded me of something I've been meaning to bring up about that.

It's a very subtle thing, but maybe you can have a look at this to see what you think -  I recall that you might be adding moving 'braking flaps' to certain shots.  Well, I wonder if there could be one added briefly opening and closing on the left-hand side of the second one that enters the frame, which then veers off to it's left?

It's just that I always think that the movement of this particular Snowspeeder could lend itself to this particular small addition, and would add a little subtle extra to the shot.  See what you think anyway -

As the second Snowspeeder veers over to it's left, we can see that the third one already has it's right-hand 'brake flap' up when it enters the frame.  So this might make for a nice addition here, if you think it suits the second Snowspeeder's movement -