This is great! I really love the cuted anie(one more arrow)-padme's conv. Its really straight forward and like you pointed no more teen movies :D I love the music that you chose there!

As for the GG new music i can say this works to a point.. after that sounds a bit off while the chorus march of the general is cut/entered so violently to the the scene. You may want to use a chorus from the movie 300 or that style.

Any chance to use additional music from other JW works? Even you want to achieve a more retro/star wars feeling you must consider the orchestra that was used back then. Different cues and melodies. More dramatic etc.

Cant wait to see more

-Angel