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Post #424258

Author
MTHaslett
Parent topic
Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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Date created
9-Jul-2010, 4:34 PM

The pay off is the trick.

If Dukoo could announce in the end "It was me, posing as my apprentice, who ordered the clones" then it would be perfect. Right?

How about:

During Dukoo's long walk down the ramp toward Sidious.

Dukoo: "My old apprentice's last gift has paid off. The clones I ordered in his name are now operational, Master Sidious."

Sidious: "Welcome home, Lord Tyrannus. You have done well."

D: "I have good news for you, my Lord. The war has begun."

S: "Excellent. Everything is going as planned."