WHOA!
Your first several videos spent a lot of time point pointing out errors, but didn't offer a lot of fixes. With that last video, you've finally gotten into the meat of things. There were a few minor issues I had (people getting knocked down without showing how), but overall this was superb.
I'm officially stoked to see this edit!
I'm curious to see how you handle the Palpatine vs. Mace fight and Anakin's turn.