Oh this is looking great! Absolutely great! And I look forward to what is coming with this scene.

I think I suggested this eariler...I think you could drag out the suspence at the beginning before the lights go out. I don't particularly like how you've rushed Palps line "it's treason then." it's a bit drowned out by the sound effect of his saber poping out of his sleeve. I can't believe I'm saying this but I feel they had the right timing in the original! lol

But I know you're still messing with the scene...can't wait to see some more! :D