bobgarcia74 said:

rpvee, Actually I readded the Sith scream after a few people mentioned about maybe keeping it. Thats why you still hear it. 8)

I honestly think it just sounds like a really rough audio cut right now more than a shorter version of it. It appears with no real beginning, and ends with no real end. Either make it more like a "Sith Shout" than a "Sith Scream with a bad cut", or eliminate the scream.

The lights flickering look AWESOME! I suggest a couple flickers when he says "Are you threatening me, Master Jedi?", because that is SUCH a Sidious moment and he looks SO pissed off. Also, again, try keeping the lights off until Mace is alone with Sidious in the hallway. What does the cutting down of the Jedi look like in the dark? Like you said, the longer it's dark, the better, and the sudden revelation that Mace is now alone when the lights come back on (probably because Sidious' entire focus would then be on Mace, not also the lights) would be very scary and alarming for the viewer.

When the lights finally go out, is that boom the Force? It sounds like the generator shutting down.

EDIT: Also, have the lights get as dark as they do in the first clip! That was really spooky. The less we see of Sidious, the better.