This is gonna work great! It's gonna make it seem a LOT more plossible that Palps can take on all of these Jedi.

I think you could really have some fun and stretch out the time between when the lights go out to when Palps attacks.

Oooh...You could show Palps shadow sloooowly moving closer to the Jedi...

You could even use that shot of Mace putting his saber up over his head and now he would be using it kind of like a flashlight.

Oh! This would be a great time for Palps to use his lightning! He could kill off the other Jedi that way. But you wouldn't quite know where or whats happening...I'm drooling at the possibilities! :D

Watching it again I have a thought about reordering:

-Are you threatening me, master jedi?

-Not yet.

-It's treason then.

-lights suddenly go out

-omit closeup of saber coming out of Palps sleeve...because it's dark! :P

-red saber lights up