BobGarcia, I've been following you for awhile, first on youtube (as Mrspartansmith) And I'm very impressed. I think you can take the story further than you already are, I think you have great talent as an editor. In a way you remind me of tropperman, though you probably don't know who he is...yet lol.

I will try to contribute as much feedback as I can to help you in the creative process. I also now feel G. Grievous is well, rather Devious...good stuff. I'll comment on the mace duel soon.