Would you consider using only blue lightsabers for your edit, Bob?
And another question - would you consider removing those guys in the background as shown in these mock-ups (right click->view image).
They get killed in, like, 2 seconds, so they're pretty useless and it would make Mace seem more confident, like he's pretty sure he can take on Palpatine on his own.
And I believe Vaderous is the author of these mock-ups.
