bobgarcia74 said:
An update. Last one for awhile. Gonna be buckling down and getting as much of this done as possible. Took a few days break and ready to get back too it.
You could take some good lines from the TV show for grievous if you need them. The voice is exactly the same, and he actually has better dialogue there... I like that Grievous uses lots of bad guy one liners like "Make him suffer" or "You loose!".
I also like that Obi-Wan and Grievous have the usual relationship between a comic hero and a comic villain. They know each other, they have fought many times, and Obi Wan always manages to make fun coments about him (similar to Spiderman vs Dr Octopus, for example)
I think there should be more references to that old relationship between them. Saying lines like "we meet again, and for the last time", not having that shot of Obi-Wan surprised about his 4 arms, and things like that. That would make Grievous a character in Obi-Wan's life, not just a plot element for the first half part of the movie.
That would explain why they send Obi-Wan to kill him. That would make Grievous a better character, more than just "Hey, i know you killed the bad guy but there is another NEW bad guy you now have to kill". Its a cheat, but making Obi-Wan and Grievous know each other very well makes Grievous not be "The new guy nobody cares about".