Not to worry Bingowings, the term "Crazy" was just used for theactrics, and not accusing you of being insane. No one here that I can recall of is actually crazy, just crazed thats all. ;P
In my opinion, that scene is perfect as is. Don't forget, you had Irvin Kershner as Director on this. Far better than what Lucas could have done if he had directed this himself. I think Kershner wanted Carrie to play that line of dialog off as natural as she could as Princess Leia during a serious moment. After all she is in charge during the escape from Bespine. Leia is a pretty calm, focused and collective character. A little moody at times but she never plays backseat to anything, even though shes actually sitting in a back seat during that scene. A trait that I think alot of people seem to not notice for some reason. I doubt Ady makes any change of that type to that scene.
However, Ady could reconstruct that scene visually where the executor appears in some other fashion after she mentions it. One idea would be to have it much further back in the distance, and rapidly getting closer as the Falcon approaches.
Having the Executor as close as it is when she says the line is what the problem is really all about, and not the line itself. Thats what I would be suggesting to ady instead of the line change.
How about it Ady?