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SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *) — Page 9

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I meant to ask:

Any ideas how the opera CG fest can be toned down or being replaced with some retro ways?

References and ideas would be welcome :)

 

-Angel

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Why is everyone so against dream sequences :/ its a lot more efficient than having Anakin explain everything he's feeling to Padme. I'd keep the dream sequence but after Anakin wakes up I'd have him leave the room, Padme notices and looks worried, and then wipe to the next scene in the jedi temple, cutting out the balcony convo. That way it's ambiguous where he's going. He could be going to Palpatine for all we know.

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I'm largely against the dream sequence as it stands in the theatrical cut because it goes against what we see in the OT which should always be the Star Wars template.

The nearest thing we get to it is the cave sequence in ESB and that is symbolic and requires some interpretation.

"Difficult to see, the future"

It shouldn't be like the people in Spaceballs fast-forwarding the tape.

At least there is ambiguity but it would be better to have it more dream-like.

Adding flames and lightning might also give ambiguous flashes of what is to come.

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Bingowings said:

At least there is ambiguity but it would be better to have it more dream-like.

Adding flames and lightning might also give ambiguous flashes of what is to come.

But don't you think adding flames and stuff might stray away from the OT?

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Like adding Luke's head into Vader's mask if done properly it could be more like the OT.

It would mean editing the actual footage of Padme rather than the dream sequence.

The dream tunnel thing only appears in ROTS, it doesn't even appear in AOTC so it's out of step even for the PT.

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vaderios said:

Sneak of the possible edit's logo :)

-Angel

Nice! Is the logic behind the different logo that it'll reflect a different era than the ot? A more civilized age, perhaps?

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Octorox said:

Why is everyone so against dream sequences :/ its a lot more efficient than having Anakin explain everything he's feeling to Padme. I'd keep the dream sequence but after Anakin wakes up I'd have him leave the room, Padme notices and looks worried, and then wipe to the next scene in the jedi temple, cutting out the balcony convo. That way it's ambiguous where he's going. He could be going to Palpatine for all we know.

Actually he could go straight to Yoda. That would make sense. He needs answers about his dream so he quickly goes to Yoda...although I DO hate alot of the dialogue in that scene... lol

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brash_stryker said:

Nice! Is the logic behind the different logo that it'll reflect a different era than the ot? A more civilized age, perhaps?

The possible logic behind the new logo is just altering the usual one with something familiar but different for more variation :)


-Angel

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The way I see it the dream sequences are the easiest way to influence the edit. They can imply things and create emotion without too much seamless, continuity style cutting necessary. The content of these sequences can radically alter the film.

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Octorox said:

The way I see it the dream sequences are the easiest way to influence the edit. They can imply things and create emotion without too much seamless, continuity style cutting necessary. The content of these sequences can radically alter the film.

 Agreed. Thats why I did it 8)

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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vaderios said:

brash_stryker said:

Nice! Is the logic behind the different logo that it'll reflect a different era than the ot? A more civilized age, perhaps?

The possible logic behind the new logo is just altering the usual one with something familiar but different for more variation :)


-Angel

Well in any case, I like it!

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Angel your mockups remind me of Star Wars Dark Forces II. That is a compliment. I thought that game had the most classic Star Wars look of anything. The mood is dark and I like that.

"The other versions will disappear. Even the 35 million tapes of Star Wars out there won’t last more than 30 or 40 years. A hundred years from now, the only version of the movie that anyone will remember will be the DVD version [of the Special Edition], and you’ll be able to project it on a 20’ by 40’ screen with perfect quality. I think it’s the director’s prerogative, not the studio’s to go back and reinvent a movie." - George Lucas

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Look at these flares....Just an idea. Not final!

Utapua

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lens flares ROCKS :D

I see Only one tho :(

 

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Yeah, well the two lights on his ship are so close it looks like one flare.

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I love this! The new effects are looking great! I love how simplified the camera movements are. I do think you should remove the two words? "I suggest" from Palps. Since when does the dark lord of the Sith suggest anything? lol
Question: what was the thought process behind switching around Anakin/Padme lines? I can't decide if it works or not...hmmm
Still, VERY promising stuff!

This was posted by SomethingStarWarsRelated on my Youtube account, figured I'd respond to it here, cause then he can actually see my responce. 8)

First thing, thanks for the kind words.

The reason for the switch in the lines was because originaly the conversation starts on a high note, goes bad in the middle , and finishes on a typical high note while they hug. The way it is originaly, nothing other than the fact that Padme's pregnant comes from this conversation. We already know they have a forbidden love thing going on. So originaly this scene is a big waste of time.

The way I edited it, It starts on a bad note. (Anakins reaction to the baby). So now the high note in the middle doesn't seem so high at all. (Them discussing what there gonna do, and Anakin tossing all there worries aside.) And then the whole scene ends on a real bad note, (Anakin letting his lust get the best of him, even after all they just talked about. And Padme having to back him off of her.) Better for this conversation to end bad, leaving questions about these two.

So the way its edited now gives us more insite to the fact that Anakin is slowly gaining more Dark Side thoughts after his ordeal on  the Invisible Hand. Selfishness, lust. He hears what he wants, and blocks out the bad.

More character development the way I did it. Least thats what I think. 8)

 And btw snicket, I love the flares, looking good.

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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snicket said:

Look at these flares....Just an idea. Not final!

Utapua

 It reminds me of the mood in many of Ridley Scott's earlier films.

"The other versions will disappear. Even the 35 million tapes of Star Wars out there won’t last more than 30 or 40 years. A hundred years from now, the only version of the movie that anyone will remember will be the DVD version [of the Special Edition], and you’ll be able to project it on a 20’ by 40’ screen with perfect quality. I think it’s the director’s prerogative, not the studio’s to go back and reinvent a movie." - George Lucas

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bobgarcia74 said:

The way I edited it, It starts on a bad note. (Anakins reaction to the baby). So now the high note in the middle doesn't seem so high at all. (Them discussing what there gonna do, and Anakin tossing all there worries aside.) And then the whole scene ends on a real bad note, (Anakin letting his lust get the best of him, even after all they just talked about. And Padme having to back him off of her.) Better for this conversation to end bad, leaving questions about these two.

So the way its edited now gives us more insite to the fact that Anakin is slowly gaining more Dark Side thoughts after his ordeal on  the Invisible Hand. Selfishness, lust. He hears what he wants, and blocks out the bad.

and the scene is not much better now because of that, indeed. :)

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TMBTM said:

bobgarcia74 said:

The way I edited it, It starts on a bad note. (Anakins reaction to the baby). So now the high note in the middle doesn't seem so high at all. (Them discussing what there gonna do, and Anakin tossing all there worries aside.) And then the whole scene ends on a real bad note, (Anakin letting his lust get the best of him, even after all they just talked about. And Padme having to back him off of her.) Better for this conversation to end bad, leaving questions about these two.

So the way its edited now gives us more insite to the fact that Anakin is slowly gaining more Dark Side thoughts after his ordeal on  the Invisible Hand. Selfishness, lust. He hears what he wants, and blocks out the bad.

and the scene is not much better now because of that, indeed. :)

 Well I'm doing what I can with whats given, Making lemonaid that's hopefully alittle less bitter. 8)

Lucas wanted us so bad to feel for Anakin, that he was willing to trash Vader (The Main Villain in the following 3 movies) in the process. I'm doing my best to lessen that.

Any clue as to what you would do with the scene TMBTM? I didnt want to just cut the crap out of it, like a few other edits have.

To be honest I thought it came across pretty good, Sets a darker tone to the scene.  I'm always open to thoughts and ideas.

 My Episode 3 Edit Reign of the Dark Side

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Poster template for a more retro approach :)

Where its the big rentagle expect a picture when i will make it :)

-Angel is Iron Man

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