Hey Bob, have you seen this edit before?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhmdoI0wYC0&playnext_from=TL&videos=bNeuN48Eyc8
It's definantly interesting to see...I'm not sure how I feel about some of the cuts...but it feels a little more energetic. And some of the weird choreography is gone! :D
Another thought...are you looking at altering when Dooku flings Obi-wan into the railing? It's very um...CGI, ya know? not sure what would need to happen....it might look better if you could have Obiwan moving just a tad slower at first...then speed him up as he hits the railing? Also it might help to bring Obiwan slightly into the shadows as he passes right by the camera...I mean, that would most likely happen had they actually filmed it, right ;)