Bingowings said:

fishmanlee said:

i have a suggestion, do we actually have to see the dream? i mean Anakin explains the dream to padme later on so wouldnt be more OT to not show the dream? similar to lukes vision in ESB?

While I agree (shock horror) with fishmanlee on this point, this version is a great improvement because it implies something sinister is going on with Obi and Padme...it's very subtle but suggests so many possibly horrible interpretations that could be swimming around in Anakin's head which could add to his fall.

Have the Jedi found out about the pregnancy and are forcibly aborting it, are they killing her or torturing her for information about him?

It's a really good addition but it might help sell it better if it was made more nightmarish (maybe even a bit Lynchian) the tree cave in ESB is a sort of premonition (even if it is of a possible future) and that is more symbolic than a flash forward.

it could be cut so its just a shot of anakin with the voices playing "Padme's Ruminations" style.