Blimey, you need to give people more than an hour to respond before assuming we're not responding. I didn't feel like getting up right away, so I stayed in bed and read a book for a while. ;)
Anyway, yes, that section is the one that really kicks off the transition to AOTC (in the last 5 seconds, haha). You did it much differently than A-Man did, by going to the movie rather than showing a clip, then going right back to Ben's hut. The only thing I wonder about is if everything before then could sort of be tightened up a bit, especially since we all know ANH very well anyway. Re-ordering scenes is fine, but it's still like half an hour before we get to the big transition.