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Post #409767

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SomethingStarWarsRelated
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Star Wars Episode II: The Galaxy Divided (The Brash Cut) - CANCELLED
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Date created
17-Apr-2010, 1:50 PM

brash_stryker said:

 

Also, is there a thread here about Goodmusician's tracks?

Yes! Well I was gonna post the link but I see you've found it! :D

Yeah, Dooku's a rogue Jedi. If you notice, I've put his unhappy reaction from Jango's beheading when Padme gets scratched by the Nexu.

 I did indeed notice...that was why I asked. I thought if he was going to be a Sith than this inserted shot would really be out of place. But since he is a rogue Jedi this makes some sense.

Maybe I can cut it so that Anakin on the reek comes in the nick of time before the Nexu goes back up to finish her off.

Yeah that could work..hmm

the only other thing I might suggest is putting that geonosian cannon thingy further into the battle so it feels like the Jedi are getting wiped out towards the end of the battle...not the beginning. I know that kind of messes with the continuity of the pillars of smoke in the background...but IMO it will better help the battle build towards a climax. my 2 cents