Hey guys, sorry for being out of the loop.

It took a week to get my new laptop tuned up. I'll be starting to edit again this weekend. I'm going to need some advice for the Ilia intro scene. I've got some real tricky moments that I need some feedback on. All that garbage about her oath of celibacy has got to go, but it's just not as simple as cutting a few lines out. I've spent way too much time tweaking this scene, and may have lost all the correct story telling perspective on how it should play out. It's hard for me to just type out what I am trying to do with it, so script and visual examples are on the way for you to look at.