I like what you have there SSWR. I still wish that the Obi scene gets cut out altogether and this is where the "sister" reveal is. I would almost get rid of the Leia part where she says "I know.. somehow I've always known." I would rather see her stay a bit in silence to show how stunned she is rather than (shrugs shoulders) "yeah, I figured as much", as well as cut out the 2nd quick Han looking on. I think it would flow a lot nicer to show Luke and Leia in the far shot, Luke leave offscreen and then Han enters and says the "you love him, don't you?" line (seeing him the one time is enough to establish that he is, and has, been listening the whole time).

Oh yeah, and the extra bit with C3P0 talking about "including the Ewoks into the story will make them part of the rebellion".

Overall, excellent concept.. though what would you do at the end (when Leia reveals the "but he's my brother" bit)?

UNFINISHED JEDI BITS:
Part 1: I really like the idea of actually using the rebel disguised as a Scout Trooper, though I would change the "reactor leak" line (which, forget about a nod to Han's bit in the detention block) is rather silly, as the reactor is BEHIND them in the bunker. Better to have a more angry, active voice say something like: "We've spotted the rebels! They're heading this way!"

Part 2: could work, but I would probably put the droids even farther back, so it would be conceivable that the troops could be taken out without being noticed.

Part 3: eh... I understand it's a quickie, but I still hate the "you're shooting to kill, but we're going to say "freeze"?!?" bits from the troopers.

Overall, good stuff! If anything JEDI:R is going to be a LOOOOOT of work....