SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

DuTwan said:

Hey loved the sequence, just few things i think might be better perhaps?

first being, "what is thy bidding my master?" bit should be the last bit of the scene, makes it more powerful i feel, i don't think sidious laughing is needed. Not so keen on the bit after too. Second point, Obi steals luke!?! :O haha

Thanks for the feedback! The scene with Palps and Vader is...well...I don't necessarily like what I have...I'm not particularly good with writting new dialouge- woah I sounded like Lucas! ;)

Hmm...I didn't think about it looking like Obiwan stole Luke...just a lack of footage. Any suggestions?

Well if i was you i would cut it just after "what is thy bidding my master?".

As BarBar Jinxx said:

when Bail leaves I think Yoda says "Obi wan wait a moment" or something to that effect...

that may be enough as yoda may not like the idea of them both being with Bail.

We can assume yoda has plans for luke.