DuTwan said:

Hey loved the sequence, just few things i think might be better perhaps?

first being, "what is thy bidding my master?" bit should be the last bit of the scene, makes it more powerful i feel, i don't think sidious laughing is needed. Not so keen on the bit after too. Second point, Obi steals luke!?! :O haha

Thanks for the feedback! The scene with Palps and Vader is...well...I don't necessarily like what I have...I'm not particularly good with writting new dialouge- woah I sounded like Lucas! ;)

Hmm...I didn't think about it looking like Obiwan stole Luke...just a lack of footage. Any suggestions?

Octorox said:

Sorry :( some cool ideas but overall you're changes in pacing have ruined the best part of the PT for me. The montage ending of Ep3 is one of my favorite moments in SW. I DO like how you managed to preserve the secret of Leia however.

Well, I don't pretend to have it all figured out here...but the more I watched the original montage...the more I hated it. All of our main characters story threads get put into their same exact location for the next movie...which takes place twenty years later! If we are gonna go down that route then in ANH Luke and the rebels should land on Hoth. Or in ROTJ Luke and company should land on Tatooine to safe Han. I'm not attacking you...I'm just trying to understand why "everyone" likes the original ending so much.