"4) Klingon Battle is now moved to later in film and will become edited into a 3 way conflict (double jeopardy for the Enterprise) between V'ger / Enterprise and the Klingons."
What the? That isn't going to work. Where are you going to get the dialogue? No one on board the Enterprise even mentions Klingons. You're not planning on that dreadful computer doing all the talking, are you?
Although, I wouldn't mind seeing the attempt.