Looks great but too colorful concerning the mood and music associated... We're kinda in a den of evil with Luke at this point, seeing colorful and natural Endor would take away from that. That would be my concern.

play with contrasts..(stylized contrasts) Dark interior something bright in the exterior..and the opposite.. Find the balance you must

Great job there J!

I'll darken it, although 10seconds before that scene the establishing shot shows the DS2 & Endor in the same sort of lighting I did in mock-up

Well we can think that the 10 seconds before are altered too for stylised results right? ;)

With two bright light sources near his face he could do with a bit of light on that evil mush of his (for more skilled hands to work on):

True.. i tried with good results but then i thought it was too much..

-Angel V2