Asteroid-Man said:
OK here it is!
5.1 Surround Sound and HQ WMV Download Link:
YouTube Version:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fl8pB08hHak
Please tell me what you think! Personally I am very happy with how it turned out.
This trailer was extremely moving! Good work! A few minor critiques:
1) I would remove, at least, the very first percussion cadence you have in there before Obi-Wan is about to show Luke the lightsaber. As it is now, you've begun to tease the coming tension when I haven't even had time to settle into the first mindset you're trying to establish.
2) You're closing caption "The story of . . . . . told simultaneously" is an awfully vanilla choice of phrasing consider how much building up your trailer has done before reaching this point. I would consider coming up with something a bit more compelling for your trailer sign off with.
All things considered, 5 Stars and a "Favorite!"
EDIT: I just caught the brief hesitation you gave Ben before he says "Darth Vader." It really goes a long way to selling the idea that Ben is in fact lying about him being Luke's father. Bravo, Bravo!
EDIT 2: Where is the music from? Is it Metal Gear Solid?