Ghost said:
And SSWR- I loved what you did with the pacing of the Palps/Ani conversation. The duel shots were trimmed perfectly, but the last sequence all seemed too rushed. It needs to feel a bit more natural, but overall, this was a good step in the right direction.
Thanks Ghost!
A couple of people have now said the same thing about the end scene. But no one has said spefically said how to lengthen it. Any ideas?