Another thing about the ending of the duel: I didn't really like how Obi-Wan just left Anakin there. Maybe we could make it look like the riverbank is breaking down, and Obi-Wan has no choice but to retreat and watch his friend burn.

Obi-Wan walking away to leave his good friend burn makes the scene more emotional. We see these two as friends for a good portion of the PT, and to see it end like that just gives a darker feeling.

You're right, Farlander, the whole high ground thing was stupid.

I agree here, I also thought it was stupid how we get visually stunning Mustafar shots, only to see this this important duel end on a hill off in the distance. Im all for a more impactful ending to the duel. Im sure someone has a good idea. I like Silverkeys idea in the post above mine.

And SSWR- I loved what you did with the pacing of the Palps/Ani conversation. The duel shots were trimmed perfectly, but the last sequence all seemed too rushed. It needs to feel a bit more natural, but overall, this was a good step in the right direction.