Timstuff said:
In the current version a lot of Vader's dialogue is incoherent and comes across as non-sequesters,
While Vader is indeed very lunatic and change mood all the time ("TAKE HER AWAY!!! / I think you'd better calm down") I don't feel any of his lines in my edit are really incoherents. Vader just need a good doctor! He is a stressed guy who constantly try to keep himself calm. At least that's the way I see it.
About the audio drama thing. I did not want to use dialogue made to match the movie, I wanted really new dialogue. At one point I even contacted a youtube guy who does JEJ impersonation. Perhaps it would have been better this way to get a kind of continuity to the voice of Vader, but in the end I really wanted to edit JEJ voice from other sources, because the fun of doing it was more important to me than the continuity problem caused by using different audio sources.