Cool, I always thought the orange saturation looked bad. A common flaw with modern "colour correction" really, they just seem to bathe each shot in some bright orange or blue tint and call it a day. But your version does look perhaps too desaturated. Perhaps you could colour in some things, like the pillar, the interior lights, give the drones a brighter more metallic sheen and perhaps fill the colour of the seperatist shuttle back in too.
Basically just bring some sort of colour back into it.