Have to agree that I like the idea of the original 'Adywan' logo intro. being used in all the edits eventually too, certainly as far as the lettering itself appears, if not the background. And I'd be happy to keep hearing an 'Imperial March' cue whenever it appears too.
I remember one of my sons saying it was really cool when he first saw it. :)
Your version was still worth seeing though vaderios!