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Post #390941

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rpvee
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My Revenge of the Sith Trailer
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Date created
4-Jan-2010, 2:29 PM

Rhikter said:

Watched and rated
There's a lot of room for improvement here. My issue with it is that you've, figuratively speaking, just shown me EVERYTHING that happens in the movie. Nothing is left to the imagination. You've got lengthy clips from every duel in the film. It plays more like a scene from Star Wars: A Musical Journey than it does a real trailer. Tighten things up a bit and I promise it will go a long way.

The official trailer kind of gave everything away, too, so I didn't think it would be that big of a deal.  I suppose  that the duel clips are a bit long at first, though I tried to make the clips continually get shorter and shorter as DOTF got more intense.

I'm going to make trailers for the others in time using the same audio set-up (minus the part with all the talking, that will have music from the respective film being featured).