Ripplin said:
I haven't watched it in a while, but I believe that he's just adding all the text there at once, but if you watch it, there are video clips before the "22 Years Later" part. That may have been from the now dropped prologue, though, so...I'm not sure. ;)
"You throw names and terms at the audience right away that they have no way of understanding"
*cough*The Phantom Menace*cough* :p That's exactly how I felt sitting in the theater. I sure wasn't there to see some confusing political thing, but that's what I got!
Even some clips before "22 Years Later" can't possibly set up everything.
And just because the Phantom Menace was like that doesn't mean this Renascent project should be. In fact, isn't one of the purposes of this revisioning to help the prequels a bit?
I'm sorry to have all this critique so close to the project being done, just trying to help.