It's been fixed grammatically and also based on length and clarity. The completed text is somewhere is this thread. I can post it for you once I get to my desktop.
Post #390484
- Author
- Asteroid-Man
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: Renascent *** NOW AVAILABLE!!! ***
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/390484/action/topic#390484
- Date created
- 30-Dec-2009, 10:43 PM