I like what you did with the Mace/Palpatine conversation.
It's kind of weird how Anakin just stands there for most of it. Could you cut it so that Palpatine says "the Jedi are taking over!" just as Anakin is entering the room, and then the force lightning just as he reaches them? It would give him something to do while he's being indecisive.
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Something could be done to make Mace seem to be the aggressor in this situation so that the force lightning is more of a defensive move. If he's trying to tempt Anakin, he needs to be more sympathetic. His change from weak/frail to FORCE LIGHTING!! is too fast.
Otherwise, good job. Less whining is good thing.