Nice idea. Ady confirmed that shitty painted asteroid is gone for sure :D

An other note when had points the "big one" he looks at the left when the MF moving from its own with a very robotic move. Also the big asteroid revealing/establishing shot is pretty weak. Considering ady took care the asteroid scenes long time ago i can sit comfortable to my throne and wait for more :)

-Angel

PS:

Just Kidding :D

Edit 2:

Taking The idea from SWWR switching the angles in the death star escape i came to that conclusion that stylisticaly and visualy would be nicer if the angle is upper rather down. So the falcon seemed to enters from the up before switching again to normal one in the later shot.

Tried to eliminate the white spots replacing them with space. Assuming that the cave has gases and smoke(as we see later) some slight rays of light enhance the depth here.

Edit 3:

not sure about this but toying with the idea having smoke like we see in the later scenes:

Not too dense? maybe further? You get the picture :)