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Post #386296

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SomethingStarWarsRelated
Parent topic
Star Wars Episode II: The Galaxy Divided (The Brash Cut) - CANCELLED
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Date created
18-Nov-2009, 3:24 PM

brash_stryker said:

My aims with this edit:

To address the nonsensical plot, Jedi stupidity, Anakin being an asshole, Boba Fett being a kid, and many other issues. (will update when I can remember them all)

List of Changes:

  • New title and Crawl - Suggestions welcome and encouraged! New crawl will explain that the Clone Army is common knowledge.

 

  • Re-edited Kamino scenes to remove Jedi ignorance of the Republic ordering a clone army.

I had an idea the other day concerning the republic knowing about the clone army:

The very first senate scene could have someone (Palps) showing a "video" using the actual footage from Kamino. Maybe even have Lama Su there in a floating pod thingy narrating on top of the footage (just like in the original).

The idea is to move all of the information from that scene in the original and rework it to be used in the opening senate scene to show visually that the rebuplic is on board for this clone army.

It seems like there could be some advantages and disadvantages to this idea...one disadvantage is I don't know exactly what would take place once Obi wan lands on Kamino. lol  Just the whole Fett thing I guess...

Anyways...thought?