Dark Force Rising notes, pages 117-150 (end).
- Page 119 - I can't tell for sure, but it appears that Leia's lightsaber glow in the bottom-left panel extends slightly into the border of the panel itself.
- Page 122 - Sorry, I just have a huge distaste for these narration-boxes in this comic. This one, unfortunately, feels like it may be necessary to establish where the fuck we are.
- Page 125 - Okay, now these narration boxes aren't necessary. They also appear to be very difficult to paint out, sadly.
- Page 127 - That narration box on the top of the page seems unnecessary, and not terribly difficult to remove.
- Page 131 - I'm sure this is how it was originally, but "It's Luke, Wedge," still feels awkward. I'd change that to "Wedge, it's Luke."
- Page 136 - Do we really need to hear Han say "Never tell me the odds" again? It's just as bad (to me) as seeing the Ark in the warehouse at the beginning of Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull. What if he just says, "That sounds familiar," or something like that?
- Page 137 - Narration text, "Aboard the Quenfig," is VERY unnecessary, since we've already spent several pages bouncing back and forth between the two ships and should know what the hell the Quenfig looks like/who's on it by now.
- Page 140 - "Aboard the Katana" is also unnecessary and should be removed.
- Page 141 - The Imperial officer on the right-hand side swears, but it's represented by "@%#$!" This is incredibly childish and should be replaced by "Damn!" (since that has a history of being used in Star Wars, and fits well with the dialogue.)
- Page 144 - Neither one of the narration boxes on this page are necessary.
- Page 145 - Luke's lightsaber in the third panel goes outside of the panel frame, and it appears as if it may be slightly crooked on top of that.
- Page 147 - "Aboard the Chimaera" is unnecessary.
Will be starting The Last Command soon.
