vaderios said:

Ady since Leia points the executor in the upper section of the cockpit then stylistically and only, the shot should change from perspective POV. Besides that is a wide shot. we should see Leia and chewie :)

-Angel

This was a really good spot vaderios, as Leia does point up at quite an acute angle in the preceding shot. Your solution looks great, especially the kind of 'angle' you've used for the Executor in your version.

If Adywan wants to keep this cockpit shot as it is (which veers sharply a moment later, showing a blurred starfield and Executor in the distance), I'd like him to consider placing the Executor higher up in the frame at this point.