-Angel
vaderios, this is a very nice touch you've shown here.
However, in the 'longshot' that comes immediately before this shot, it looks like Vader's first swipe at Luke as he comes out of this doorway is outwards , and his blade seems to hit roughly where the 'narrow gap' in the railing is seen. Vader then takes another swipe at Luke (who ducks), and that seems to be only time the blade hits the doorway exterior.
So I really hope that Adywan considers adding a 'burn/singe mark' to this shot, roughly where you've placed your top one, and perhaps adds something to the railing too.