Busy with school now...thank you to those who have posted. I agree with everyone who said it needs a lot of work. Maybe I'll be able to finish it, maybe not. Like I said I was reluctant to send it out unfinished, but it time for all of you to see it in whatever form it was in.
But do you at least see what I had in mind? With a little imagination you could see what I wanted for the finished movie.
Episode II could have been so much more. The PT could have been so much more. All I've done is taken a very flawed work and chopped it up and pasted it back together, but imagine if the casting had been better, the costumes had been better. The cinematography, the scripting. And THEN get a good editor to make something out of it.