Working on a cutlist tonight and came across this gem. So many faneditors cut the whole fireplace scene out, it was a bit of a shock to find an edit that left it in.
ANAKIN: From the moment I met you, all those years ago, not a day has gone by when I haven't thought of you. (sighs) And now that I'm with you again, I'm in agony. (inhales) The closer I get to you, the worse it gets. Th-the thought of not being with you...I can't breathe...I'm haunted by the kiss that you should never have given me. My heart is beating, (as she tries to look away) hoping that that kiss will not become a scar. You are in my very soul, tormenting me. What can I do? I will do anything that you ask...
Not only is it awful, but it goes on and on and on.
EDIT: Sorry about the large font. I can't figure out a way to fix it. But it actually reads even worse that way, doesn't it?