The Concierge said:

(art student, here!),

D-"The Republic has failed. The Jedi have failed. You must join me, Obi-wan, and together we will destroy the Sith!"

O-W- (pause) "What is your bidding?"

Dooku approaches hesitantly, with skeptical hope

O-W- "Shall I kneel at your feet, Master?"

Dooku's hope visually dissipates

O-W- (with increasing sarcasm) "I would, but... (looking up) ...at the moment I am quite unable to do so."

Dooku now has a look of outright malice

D- "You're a fool."

O-W- "No, Master. You may once have been a great Jedi Knight, worthy of following, but no longer. I am your failure, just as you've failed my Master before me. Your own vision has been clouded by the Dark Side. I will never join you, Dooku."

Obi-wan has scored a hit, and they both know it. Dooku turns to leave.

D- "It may be difficult to secure your release".

Awesome! More art people here :D nice to see them around.

I love the dialogue! As a first draft it stands...

Cant wait for more

-Angel