Iv sent you that CG animation you asked for that you needed for your film to your hotmail account
Is this supposed to be confidential. You didn't need to post that, it has me curious now.
Second, I don't think his entrance is weak, but it could and should be better considering his importance and the importance of the battle. When he walks in, I don't like how we can't see him that well because he has to push everything out of his way in a crowded room.