Darth Venal said:
Savage said:
VincentSmalls said:
Version 2 is up. Sorry if I'm clogging up the boards with this. I will post in the other thread too when I'm done with A New Hope. Is this better everyone? I hadn't finished when I posted originally and was fully aware the back was horribly bare. This is what I'm going for across each of the three covers... I'll see what I can do about the repeated At-At stencil if it's still badly noticable each of the three are the same. Enjoy!
And, just to satisfy my inner English-nazi, I would change the "Lovingly..." paragraph to "Lovingly crafted by fan editor Adrian Sayce, The Empire Strikes Back: Revisited combines elements from the 1980 theatrical release and the 2004 DVD Special Edition with hand crafted special effects shots to create a definitive version of the classic film."
Custom covers are da bomb!
Well, English-nazi (sic), your grammatical fascism also needs work. It's "handcrafted" and it has to be "the" definitive version, not "a" definitive version.
Darth V,
You are correct, sir! I must hang my head in shame. I switched my "a"s and "the"s. "A definitive version" makes no sense; no sense at all! :) And those damned double words always throw me. Single word? Two words? Hyphenated? Aargh!
To revise:
"Lovingly crafted by fan editor Adrian Sayce, The Empire Strikes Back: Revisited combines elements from the 1980 theatrical release and the 2004 DVD Special Edition with handcrafted special effects shots to create the definitive version of a classic film."
Oh, and it's English-Nazi, capitalised.
And it's actually capitalized, not capitalised. ;)