That doesn't fit the scene at all. There is no dramatic structure to that piece, not the section you used, at least.
Post #381067
- Author
- Darth Venal
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- Info & Ideas: ESB and ROTJ Wishlist
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/381067/action/topic#381067
- Date created
- 9-Oct-2009, 7:56 PM