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DuTwan
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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9-Oct-2009, 3:09 PM

rcb said:

fishmanlee said:

Darth Chronus said:

I've been working on a cover for TESB:R  (I'm also gonna make a new ANH:R cover as well) - here's the TESB one so far:

 

It's obviously based on the official style DVD covers and also a couple of fanmade one's out there. What do you guys think of it - any suggestions on how to improve it?

EDIT: I tried making it small, but it won't let me post it small for some reason - so sorry if it's taking up space.

 very good now for comments: luke and vaders sabers look weird, yodas face is kinda strange near the bottom, the "revisited" should be shifted over to the left a little bit so the "the empire strikes back" is in between the end of the "R" and the end of the "D" and it looks a bit blurred, vader look kinda looks stretched and the end of Luke's saber is pointy/blocky.

 yea, the light sabers also look weird to me also. is luke's saber purple?

 Sorry to be so negative but its constructive critism not anything else. Vader looks squashed, Yoda looks too chalky, as if he were a chalk drawing. Luke's head looks like its been stuck on at a weird angle, his arm is also at a weird angle. Lightsaber blade too thick and short. As been mention the 'revisited' section needs to be moved to the left. Apart from that though i do love the positioning of it all though. I feel like making my own now, gonna go for an individul look though. ;)